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Post by Admin on Nov 27, 2015 2:17:03 GMT
Dear students of 7 B,as we had no classroom session for group 2.Please watch their you tube movie and write down your comments in a form of essay not less than 300 words.This is the address.The dead line is due to Monday,Nov 30,2015 www.youtube.com/watch?v=BLGhK0vFWaw |
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Post by fitrirahayu on Nov 29, 2015 15:12:31 GMT
I will give comment for the third group. The first comment is for the first presenter, Kholistiana Idayanti. She has explained the part of taking reservation and types of reservation. There were some mistakes did by her. When she said “I will introduction about reservation...”, there was a grammatical error. It is important to remember the positive pattern of Simple Future Tense : S+will/shall+V-1+O. So, the sentence should be “I will introduce the reservation...”, or it can be “I will give the introduction of reservation”. Then, Kholistiana had the wrong pronunciation in two words of reservation and pay. She pronounced reservation as this way : /ˌrezeˈveɪʃən/, it should be : /ˌrezəˈveɪʃən/, and she pronounced pay as this way : /paɪ/, it should be : /peɪ/. The second comment is for Putri Finda. By the same token, Putri did the wrong pronunciation. She pronounced produce became procedure. As we know that those words have different meaning and different word class. Next, Putri did the wrong pronunciation in the word of event became even. Let we show the phonetic transcription of the two words : event /ɪ'vent/ and even /'i:vən/. The are definitely different. Then, she did some grammatical errors. When Putri said : a. “ you wants to...”, it should be “ you want to...”. b “ you must be go somewhere” be should be omitted become “ you must go somewhere” c. “ if you are join...” it should be “ if you join...” d. “ when someone wants to cancellation”, cancellation should be changed become cancel. Furthermore, the comment for Nandha. I think there were no wrong pronunciation and grammatical error in her presentation. Moreover, the third group didn’t give the video of taking reservation. Finally, the third group did good enough presentation overall. They used prezi powerpoint for presenting their topic. Next, they could use camtasia and uploaded their video in you tube. In addition, they have given detail information and clear enough explanation. Thank you  |
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Post by Admin on Dec 2, 2015 1:57:14 GMT
It is awesome remarks.In your opinion,before presenting the topic what should they have been done?
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Post by Admin on Dec 2, 2015 1:57:45 GMT
I will give comment for the third group. The first comment is for the first presenter, Kholistiana Idayanti. She has explained the part of taking reservation and types of reservation. There were some mistakes did by her. When she said “I will introduction about reservation...”, there was a grammatical error. It is important to remember the positive pattern of Simple Future Tense : S+will/shall+V-1+O. So, the sentence should be “I will introduce the reservation...”, or it can be “I will give the introduction of reservation”. Then, Kholistiana had the wrong pronunciation in two words of reservation and pay. She pronounced reservation as this way : /ˌrezeˈveɪʃən/, it should be : /ˌrezəˈveɪʃən/, and she pronounced pay as this way : /paɪ/, it should be : /peɪ/. The second comment is for Putri Finda. By the same token, Putri did the wrong pronunciation. She pronounced produce became procedure. As we know that those words have different meaning and different word class. Next, Putri did the wrong pronunciation in the word of event became even. Let we show the phonetic transcription of the two words : event /ɪ'vent/ and even /'i:vən/. The are definitely different. Then, she did some grammatical errors. When Putri said :
a. “ you wants to...”, it should be “ you want to...”.
b “ you must be go somewhere” be should be omitted become “ you must go somewhere”
c. “ if you are join...” it should be “ if you join...”
d. “ when someone wants to cancellation”, cancellation should be changed become cancel.
Furthermore, the comment for Nandha. I think there were no wrong pronunciation and grammatical error in her presentation. Moreover, the third group didn’t give the video of taking reservation. Finally, the third group did good enough presentation overall. They used prezi powerpoint for presenting their topic. Next, they could use camtasia and uploaded their video in you tube. In addition, they have given detail information and clear enough explanation.
Thank you :))
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Post by Admin on Dec 2, 2015 1:57:59 GMT
It is awesome remarks.In your opinion,before presenting the topic what should they have been done?
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Post by Tito Dwi Yuliyanto on Dec 5, 2015 7:23:20 GMT
Let me give the comment for group 3. I just want to add the grammatical and pronounciation error of this group which may be missed by fitrirahayu. The first comment is for Kholistiana as the first presenter.
1. She pronounced, “we can not make guest wait in a long”. It should be “we can not make guest wait longer”.
2. She also pronounced “the another ” by pronouncing [ðə]. It should be [ði] because after the word “the” is vocal.
3. She also pronounced arrival with wrong pronounciation. She pronounced [‘ʌraɪvəl], it should be [əˈraɪvəl].
4. There was grammatical error when she explained about the guest confirmation. She pronounced,“ the guest not give confirmation”. It is important to remember the negative pattern of simple present S+does/do+not+V1+O. So, it should be “the guest does not give confirmation”
5. She pronounced,”the next presentation will be present by Finda”. As we know that is passive voice. So, it should be,”the next presentation will be presented by finda.”
The second comment is for Finda as the second presenter.
1. She pronounced confident by pronouncing [ˈkoʊnfədənt], it should be [ˈkɑnfədənt]
2. She said,”another friends”. It should be another friend, as we know another is for singular.
3. She had wrong prononciation with amandments. She pronounced amandments like amandemen in Indoenesia language
The third comment is for Nandha as the three presenter.
1. She had grammatical error when she said “the reserver who accept....”. It should be “the reserver who accepts” as we know it is adjective clause, and “who accepts” modifies the reserver(singular)
2. She pronounced problem with [ˈproʊbləm]. It should be [ˈprɑbləm]
3. She also pronounced,”the example” by pronouncing [ðə]. It should be [ði] because after the word “the” is vocal.
For the first and the second presenter: the box video of you on the corner covers the material in Frezi power point, so the audience can’t see the material. Next time, you have to fix it.
That is all for my comment about this group. That was a common mistake, because we are still learning. This group did good enough presentation overall. I am sorry if I have mistake for this correction, I am not selfopinionated. Thank you
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Post by fitrirahayu on Jan 28, 2016 14:37:00 GMT
Thank you Sir.In my opinion, they have to comprehend the whole material that will be presented, so they can explain the material fluently and confidently.In addition, the group should practice for two or three times before doing the presentation. This is do to minimize mistake in grammatical error, wrong pronunciation and etc.
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